Critize Me

• Artist: HarlequinGirl27
• Description: poem i wrote when i was sad and depressed
• Date: 04/24/2009
• Tags: critize depressed cutting

There down yonder
Written in blood
Are all the dead dreams
There to portray
All the dead dreams
That just wont go away
There is the girl with the body so clean
Except for her wrists, but what does that mean?
The pain that she goes through, ripping the seams
Leaving her heart dangling by strings
There in the bathroom on the tile floor
Her and the blade...
Locked and closed door
Looking at the new marks which she made
Counting them out
There are now twenty-three
Im wishing and hoping that somewhere about
Those people wont critize me.

Comments

[19cherries91]

I can't tell you how much this applies to my life. I struggled with constant depression, but I welcome it into my life now. No one understands my life and no one takes the time to do so. I hope you find peace someday.

[pong kiyo]

Aw, it's sad and it's true, some people are still sad in this world and people don't take the time to cheer them up... That's why I put this as my favorite. nice poem, and sad life.