Pluto

• Artist: 2014_North_Star
• Description: I wrote this in 5th grade on the so-called "planet" Pluto. It's based on the tune of "Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star".
• Date: 04/30/2009
• Tags: pluto planet

"Pluto"
based on Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star

Pluto, Pluto, the dwarf planet
Tiny, tiny, all alone
Cold and small
Cold and small
No one visits
Not at all
Really, really far away
Poor, poor Pluto
But oh well

Comments

[abcd_emiko]

it's such a cute song

[290DarkStars]

wow, and pluto aint even a planet any more. Stupid scientists labled it a 'floating chunk of ice in space" you poem/song is correct, but I think that you could work on the rythem and the lines a bit more... and, oh Yah "It was freakin' 5th grade Dark! C'mon" oh, dont worry, this is some good stuff for 5th grade... after all, thats why i gave you a 5/5 ^^