My (ex) best friend

• Artist: Chizen
• Description: This happened to me it is a set of haiku's and I'm not sure if annoyed is one or two syllables so don't get mad at me if it is one.
• Date: 05/01/2009
• Tags: best friend

Oh what did i do?
Oh what did i do to you?
I was very nice.

Oh what did go wrong?
You got very mad at me,
now I am so sad.

I asked Madison,
I also asked Neha too,
Oh what should i do?

I was very good,
You got so very annoyed
Oh what did i do?

Comments

[step n wolf]

I can follow what you're saying. I had a friend dump me and never said why until 5 yrs later(he was wrong in his assumption of what happened) an/noy is 2 syllables so u did good. American haikus are different then the Asian versions and your use of the forum is very nice....

[Chizen]

Well I was going to use rhyming words but i couldn't think of many for this subject

[Opalescent_violet_14]

don't take me the wrong way...i know how you feel about a friend ditching you... just keep at the poetry. =)

[Opalescent_violet_14]

well, i think that you shouldn't have used haikus because they are usually about nature and i think your words are too simple