Dazed

• Artist: Valoralin
• Description: This just popped into my head. Tell me what you think of it. ^_^
• Date: 05/03/2009
• Tags: dazed

I believe that in this life
We live in shame
Some of their own doing
Others of what was done to them
No matter where it comes from
We all live with shame
Some learn to live with it
Other would rather die and be done with it
But for me nothing really will bother me
The reason for that is, I’m to much in a daze

Comments

[tjenator]

kewl. i like the whole daze thing cuz im like that too

[iiPara Siempre]

Very good.

[Fiona La Poete]

Finally, someone who didn't force rhyme into their poem on here. e.o

Yours is pretty good, I like the topic and the words you used.

On the last line, to should be too.