The girl

• Artist: LoneNija
• Description: written by LoneNija
• Date: 05/03/2009
• Tags: girl

The girl walks as if she's alone .
she walks with a purpose to find the one she loves , love to her means dieing for that person .
"why should I throw my life away so that other b***h can have my man ", why should he feel about with her but not with me .
The girl

Comments

[pure seyelance]

breeze, your too harsh, even though it is all to mellow, ok it is pretty ballistic, ill give it 2/5

[Petals on the Breeze]

It's rubbish.
It's short, it doesn't flow, it's less of poetry and more of less.

Sorry, but I'm always harsh.

[BunBunluv123]

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