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My heart, ripped from my chest
Of all my friends, you were the best
You left me cold and full of hate
I was in an awful state
I couldn't move and couldn't breathe
my tears wold fall my soul would bleed
But now I've found a better way
and you can't hurt me with what you say
I still miss you and always will
but the hole you left, it will be filled
- Title: Losing You
- Artist: ashkyns
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Description:
This poem is about dating and losing my best friend
- Date: 05/04/2009
- Tags: losing
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Comments (3 Comments)
- pink phosphorus - 12/31/2009
- i can respect this because of what you went through ....but it has all been said before.....many times
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- forever_her_guardianangel - 05/04/2009
- great work i really like it i can almost feel it and thats what poetry is all about making them feel you
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- Curly whirly - 05/04/2009
- oooh, Nice! ^^
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