I Asked...

• Artist: The Lazy Powm
• Description: we actually did this at school...
  i think it was supposed to be based off of a real poem but she never told us so i dunno if it's like stealing...
  i thought of all most of the words myself
  the only ones that aren't mine are the 'i asked' and 'and it' and stuff like that
  but overall it is mine...
• Date: 05/06/2009
• Tags: asked questions

I asked the leaf why it was green
And it wrinkled and turned golden red
I asked the cloud why it was gray
And it wept tears of dejection
I asked the fire why it was warm
And it dwindled and died into cold ashes
I asked the light to shine
And it was chased away by creeping darkness
I asked the stars to illuminate
And it did, and the brightness was blazing with brilliant diamonds
I asked the seas why they were so wide
And they stretched further as blankets of undulating blue green
I asked myself why so many questions
And the trees blossomed
The birds sang
The breeze whispered
And I kept quiet and everything was perfect

Comments

[MalevolentChocolate]

I liked this quite a bit, though there was some need for more commas and more breaks in the lines (like an actual poem instead of paragraph)

I loved it! Thank You.