it's raining on april fool's

• Artist: atelltalesine
• Description:
• Date: 05/10/2009
• Tags: down rain dark cold fall

cold. freezing rain. falls
down.
drumming arhythmatically on my
downturned head
each drop. falls.
chills run down (empty sobs)
soulless tears (it won't stop)
fall down.

dreams plunge down. into a
bottomless.
chasm. (devoid of light)
nothing can escape the black hole of shattered memories.

down.
down.
down.
down.

darkness.

Comments

[Celtic_Warrioress]

The way it's laid out makes it a little hard to read. It starts off with a nice rhythym and flow but it sort of goes askew after down turned head. I like the theme but yeah it doesn't flow to well.