A day in The Life of

• Artist: Mecha Fullmetal
• Description: Just a General Poem I came up with on a creative whim.
• Date: 05/13/2009
• Tags: life

A day in the life of me
I live so solemnly
Free from the World
Apart from the average caste always performing some menial task being all alone doing whatever I can to pass the time
As I sit in a dark room
Where no one seems to care that I’m alive
No one seems to want to know No one knowing the true genius behind the tears and sorrow
Not until the new dawn comes
When I prepare myself for school
Full of cool people
That I’m happy to consider my friends
People I know and hang out with
Until the time ends and
I head to the place of darkness yet again

Comments

[Mecha Fullmetal]

But anyway as I forgot to say thank you for the criticism it's very helpful in what I need to write more things about rather than be a stupid emo

[Mecha Fullmetal]

Umm ok first off this isnt really true i just like making up stuff so yea I'm not really an emo and I'm sorry i ruined your time here on Gaia

[Lokier066]

Ok lets start off by saying I go to sites to avoid emo's and I figure a anime site would have mostly fans of Japanese rock and anime but now as it seems you have spread like a virus to this as well like other things emo's do, this poem is horrible I could write a better one with my hand behind my back and and a blind fold on.write about anger or your life outside just become more social I'm Gothic and better then your emo life.don't write emo again plz (criticism hurts doesn't it)

[Stupified DisturbedOne]

rhythm is off significantly, and I gave you one star for rhyming twice. And last but not least if your going to make a poem like that, make it more angry than EMO.(criticism hurts doesn't it)