I Want To Be More Then Just Me

• Artist: xXmusic_luv3rXx
• Description: I don't really know what to say about this poem. I guess the poem says it all...
• Date: 05/14/2009
• Tags: want more then just xxmusicluv3rxx

I Want To Be More Then Just Me

I want to be nice
I want to be polite
I want to be the perfect little girl
That everyone always wants
But I try my best
Don’t get me wrong
I want to be calm
I want to be quiet
I want to be the one everyone likes
But I’m not
And everyone doesn’t
I want to be the one my sister depend on
I want to be the one my sister can look up to
I want to be the one my sister can trust
But she can’t
And she never will
I want to be good
I want to be kind
I want to be the daughter you always wanted
But I can never be that
I can never be what you would like me to be
I am me
And that is all
I can’t be more then that
And I won’t be less

Comments

[Blackening_Stars]

Don't mind haters,they just don'd dig it.
I love this poem.It is very true,and amazingly-well done.
I can so realate this to my story.
But I have to be myself. . .Because that is the way I get to know myself better.That's who I am.And I have to stick with myself for the rest of my life 'till the end.
5/5. <3. This poem is now one of my favourites. smile

[xXmusic_luv3rXx]

In the closing lines it states that i CAN'T be more not that i won't, maybe you should reread it

[Tiej]

your seemed to desire to be more than what you are
and you state you dont want to aspire to it in the closing lines???
hello.... HYPOCRITICAL !!!!
2/5

[Sunafire]

Understand that feeling totally xD
But yeah, it's an alright poem, could've added a little structure and imagery.