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the scores have finally come
my heart beats with
unnoticed excitement
each name is called
the tension grows worse
i can feel my ears
be filled with sounds of squeals
they passed, not failed
and son its my turn
my pen gripped at hand
the piece of paper crumbles
i can see the numbers on the sheet
( it holds my comign future )
i listen as she says them
my mind isn't taking it in
but when i finally see the numbers
my face turns emotionless
i cna already see my family's surprise
( how will they really react )
i can't hold it in
tears come from my eyes
as i lay my head dow
i can't help but whisper,
"I PASSED..."
- by a robot with human hair |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/20/2009 |
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- Title: Test Scores
- Artist: a robot with human hair
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Description:
I just got my End of Year Exams socres back...
I wrote this to show my reaction... - Date: 05/20/2009
- Tags: test scores
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Dr Scheisskopf - 08/24/2009
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I will comment this again... ps. I KILL THINGS... gasp. OMG WTFBBQ?!?! you knew that already lol. I like the way it ends.
it starts all tense and stuff and then it ALL dissapears with the last line - Report As Spam
- Dr Scheisskopf - 05/28/2009
- heh lol ... thats sorta how I feel bout tests
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- Tililaco - 05/25/2009
- Yeesh. Tense. I like the emotion in that. (Tests are stressful)
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