Thunderstorm

• Artist: xxxemokittyskittlesxxx
• Description: Wrote this when I was in school watching dark clouds swirl up into the endless heavens.
• Date: 05/22/2009
• Tags: thunderstorm

Thunder booming as a pounding drum.
Light flashing as a camera captures a precios moment in life.
Water falling as a waterfalls mist makes a rainbow.
Rain falls from dark clouds that wait to release their saddness to the world.
Ligtning stretched scross the sky that brongs light for only a moment,
then it's gone forever.
Thunder pounding. It rings through the barren wastelands of the silent hills and endless sky.

Comments

[despisd]

I see a few spelling mistakes, seven grammatical errors and i detect ignorance. 4/5