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I close my eyes.
Tears stream down my face.
You told me lies,
Wrapped with blue ribbon lace.
I hurt so badly.
I cry so much.
You never told me,
You never tell me,
Instead of telling you flee.
You run away,
Though I wish you'd stay.
So I ask you,
Do you really care??
- by hot cherries101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/23/2009 |
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- Title: do you really care
- Artist: hot cherries101
- Description: please rate and comment!! lol thnx
- Date: 05/23/2009
- Tags: really care
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Talathiel Daerwen - 06/05/2010
- 5/5 love it!!^^
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- TheKhamaseen - 05/24/2009
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my oh my-
don't write when you're emotional, write in retrospect...
there weren't even any metaphors in here...
and it was so bad... you hurt me emotionally
with the poor quality of your writing. - Report As Spam
- Rickmya - 05/23/2009
- yes, i do care
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