new world in love

• Artist: Falling Halo
• Description: i wrote this when i asked a girl out... she said (dramatic pause) yes. that was a couple years ago. we've gone our separate ways now. she was cheating on me. tmi... any way feel free to comment. i also give permission to be used in your own personal matters if you rate it. (constructive criticism would be appreciated)
• Date: 05/23/2009
• Tags: love world

I'll give you a gift
To show I care,
To show I’ll be around
When no ones there.
And remember
Love is friendship set on fire,
So if you’re employin’
My hearts for hire.
If you’ll be mine
I promise you’ll see
A whole new world,
You’ll only see with me.
With stars in the sky
Even on the darkest night,
Even if we’re blind
We’ll see every light
Leave from this world
Don’t be a mime,
I’ll speak now
I’ll be there at any time.
If you say no,
We’ll be friends.
I’ll be yours ‘till time ends

Comments

[Falling Halo]

thanx very much.

[xXallicandoismissuXx]

aaaaaawwwww i loved it!

[maydaymouse]

I love it, and I am sorry about that girl though, but anyways the poem is good. Very sweet^^5/5

[Dreamy i_luv _Bleach]

i think the writing was ok but dont give up there will be a girl for u just wait and see