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Tytionna 's hands are like baby doll hand
her hair are like strains of string
OMG her voice is like a squeky bike
and the best part about her is her eyes that shine like a star shinnig.
no matter what happens, she will always be my best little sister i ever had( she is my only sister that i have )
- by lildiva108 |
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- | Submitted on 05/27/2009 |
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- Title: The best sister on earth!
- Artist: lildiva108
- Description: my sister is the best to me eventhough she can be annoying. she looks up to me n i repect that and i luv describing her. please tell me what you relly think about it. i will be just fine no matter what you say.thx
- Date: 05/27/2009
- Tags: best sister earth
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- i will utterly kill you - 05/30/2009
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not good, need's better puncuation, absolutely no commas until the end.....
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