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-These Petals-
These petals,
They were red once
Full of life and of fragrance
These petals,
I see them now
They are lifeless and dry
These petals,
Corners crinkled
Colors faded
These petals,
Linger even when the flower
Is nowhere to be found
These petals,
Though tattered and torn
Still remain
These petals,
I’ve come to realize
Are more alive then they’ll ever be
These petals,
Still existing, still beautiful
And still fragrant with the sent of life
These petals,
Are eternal
In my heart.
- Title: These Petals
- Artist: Arkelle
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Description:
Poem ment to reflect the feelings of loss. It is about how even things that are physically gone can still remain in memory.
Thank you so much for looking! ^^ If you like it please check out my journals, art, or other poems! Please comment and rate! Thank you~ - Date: 05/29/2009
- Tags: these petals memories realization arkelle
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Comments (4 Comments)
- havishanta - 07/04/2009
- Wow! That was amazing! Keep writing. I really liked the repetition and the form. Short, simple, yet complex and deep with feeling. Love it! 5/5! : D
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- -KimDarling8D- - 05/31/2009
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I really liked this one,
You expressed your feelings in a intresting way
And the charistics that you added were very nice(:
I would be intrested in checking your art:3
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- LethalDark13 - 05/30/2009
- Nice
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- Macabre Forever - 05/29/2009
- You like to say "tattered and torn" ive noticed.I like your writting but your style is not my norm.Your a great writter,keep on posting! 4/5
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