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for kenny,
You caught me by surprise with thoe beautifal brown eyes, you said why hello theyre gorgeous but, when i turned away you caught me by surprise. You said ill make it worth youre while if you just say "i need you and youre love" but, i couldnt you were fake, you said you were the real deal nothing but the reald deal, youre looks appealed me but,.... you were FAKE neutral
- by Inmyownworld500 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/29/2009 |
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- Title: My fake love
- Artist: Inmyownworld500
- Description: this is just a quik peom i made up sgowing something about a guy i liked... but hes not who i thought he was plz rate!!
- Date: 05/29/2009
- Tags: fake love
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- Werefyre - 10/31/2009
- Um...is it really a poem? I see a couple rhyming words, yeah, but there's no real rhythm to it. More of a ramble, and I'll leave it at that before I get nitpicky. 2/5. O_o
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