My First Dream

• Artist: angelofdeathe07
• Description: This a poem I wrote while I was in basic training for the army. The reason why its called the first dream is because it was literally the first dream that I had had in over 6 weeks. It is about my girlfriend(who wasn't my girlfriend at the time but is now :-)) But thanks for the ratings and I hope you like it.
• Date: 05/30/2009
• Tags: first dream

I see you standing there,
Rain falling all around you,
Washing away your pain.
You truly look beautiful.
Your hair down on your shoulders,
Your eyes closed with mouth slightly open.
You look peaceful.
You look pure.
Your eyes are closed,
But souls wide open.
All the pain,
Everything from the years passed,
It all dissolves.
Slowly you open your eyes.
You look around,
Knowing I’m watching.
A smile forms,
And you turn and walk,
Disappearing into the night.

Comments

[tocsika]

u are heart warmer..