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In my dreams she takes the form
Of a beautiful young woman
Long black hair the color of ebony
Eyes as green as the woods surrounding her
But I see past her disguise
And into those eyes
She may look harmless
But this I know
In others dreams she takes many forms
Whether she is kind and peaceful
Or harsh and deadly
She is the one that haunts us
She is the thing that lures us
Away from our safe haven
Deep into the dark of the night
She appeals to our likes
Appears the best to us
She sees our memories
She sees our dreams
She can be anyone
She can be anything
No one can stop her
The end is near
She haunts our dreams more and more
We are constantly under attack
Some say she’s the spawn of devils
But only I know the truth
She was once human
But she was so evil
Not even the devil would take her
Hell let her loose
To the forbidden plane
The plane of dreams
So there she haunts
Until the end of time
Then she waits
Outside the gates
Never to get in
- by alexsblackrose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: Dreams
- Artist: alexsblackrose
- Description: Haha, there's no description to it LOL
- Date: 05/30/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- xX-KiNgOfMuFfnS-Xx - 06/08/2009
- this is my fav you rawk buddie!! ^-^
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- alexsblackrose - 06/01/2009
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^_^ Thanks for the positive comments... Now, I don't mind critisism... As long as you don't say you absolutely hate it (Honestly, just say you don't like it or don't care for it) And you don't tell me it has to rhyme... GRRRR!
But thanks Jakumaru! Glad you like it! - Report As Spam
- HurtRebelChick - 05/31/2009
- FAB!
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- Jakumaru - 05/31/2009
- wtf? who the hell is that guy? i agree with alexsblackrose.. wat an a**.. not a way to treat a chick. btw. the poem is actually pretty original. It is actually very poetic. like it. wink
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- alexsblackrose - 05/31/2009
- A. I'd rather have no description to it than blabber on about the story behind it... It's not the point of this... B. It doesn't have to rhyme... But oh well, that your opinion and if it was a waste of time to read, it must have been a waste of time to comment now wasn't it?
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- i will utterly kill you - 05/30/2009
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ABSOLUTELY HATED IT! There was no description to it, it didn't rhyme at all, and you know what? It's just a waste of time to read.
SIGNED,
MYSTERY NINJA - Report As Spam