Living in painDieing in misery

• Artist: 88VINCENT88
• Description: This poem is everything i feel right now its all i know and all i am.
  not much of a discription huh?
• Date: 06/06/2009
• Tags: living paindieing miser

As the blood purs from my viens
i am reveling in the pains
its the only thing i feel
as i tear my skin off peal by peal
why does noone understand
why i have this razor in my hand
oh my god i want to die
yet alone i weep and cry
and perhaps ive cut to deep
as i can hear the funeral bells
mommy i wanna go to heaven
why are they sending me to hell?

Comments

[dunkelheit88]

I love ur poem josh its aweome. sad though. =<

[Lelouchy]

wooh, soo deep - i'm not emo, if i could class myself as anything, there wouldn't be a category for me, because there's soo many sides i carry. But i really like this XD

[meaty buns]

I like that...I'm not emo nor goth, im what I am yet that speaks out a lot. 5/5

[WorIds]

yes i am emo and i love this poem...it shows the thoughts of, from wat i have observed, an emo person who doesn't want to die and has many skeletons in her closet that cause her to believe she deserves the pain. it seems to have an underling conflict of the outward "i want to die" and the inner " i want to live" that i see in here as well. very nice work 4.5/5

[Peub]

I'm Goth, not emo, but I have nothing against them, I like this poem, it's very hard to find rhyme and it's actual meaningful.

[88VINCENT88]

Sigh this was what i wrote when my ex broke my heart.
and my mom and dad hate me. and if you arent emo and you hate emos please try and find out who we are before hating us.