invisible wings

• Artist: raeface
• Description: hmm its about my horse ^^ but it could be for anyone really
• Date: 06/10/2009
• Tags: invisible wings

i speak from my heart,
and from my very soul
our love is an art
our love is a whole

You're an angel in disguise,
with invisible wings; help me fly
youre my hearts best prize
together we'll touch the skies

Comments

[[Pillow]-[Pants]]

Awww biggrin

[Hiraetha]

Not bad, but you have some spelling errors
Second-last line: *You're. (your is posessive, i.e.: "Your stuff" wink
Also, first letter of each new line should be capitalized.

[Lost n forgotten Soul]

aww dude i absalutly LOVE this poem! its really good.