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i speak from my heart,
and from my very soul
our love is an art
our love is a whole
You're an angel in disguise,
with invisible wings; help me fly
youre my hearts best prize
together we'll touch the skies
- Title: invisible wings
- Artist: raeface
- Description: hmm its about my horse ^^ but it could be for anyone really
- Date: 06/10/2009
- Tags: invisible wings
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- [Pillow]-[Pants] - 02/12/2010
- Awww biggrin
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- Hiraetha - 06/12/2009
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Not bad, but you have some spelling errors
Second-last line: *You're. (your is posessive, i.e.: "Your stuff" wink
Also, first letter of each new line should be capitalized. - Report As Spam
- Lost n forgotten Soul - 06/10/2009
- aww dude i absalutly LOVE this poem! its really good.
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