Do You Know?

• Artist: Steihlia
• Description: in my last poem i wrote that mebe i would write a poem about "thinking about him sparked a flame that lit my candle and set me on fire". so this is it. its terribly short, and just plain terrible in my OPINION, but let me know what you think.
  
  thanks guys who comment on my work. it really keeps me going even in the darkest of times.
• Date: 06/11/2009
• Tags: candle love

Do you know what you've done?
You sparked a flame that lit my candle and set me on fire.
Do you know what you've caused?
You caused a passion beyond belief.
Do you know what I think when I see you?
I think of a light guiding me through the darkness.
Do you know what you've said?
You said "I love you".
Do you know what I thought?
I thought you meant it.

Comments

[Shin3_Brit3]

its ok

[Kanashii Komoriuta]

it doesnt matter if its short! what matters is the thought or if its good... biggrin remember is not quantity its quality! ;D i like it! i like the last part! its sooo true!!

[fasya91]

trust me, as short as it is, it still awesome.
and i love it. 5 stars for you smile

[XxGothicXxManXx]

that is really good i give it 5 stars