His Eyes

• Artist: Overlord Iketeru
• Description: My first poem. I thought of it while I was writing in my friend and I's notebook, about a special someone in my life...or who I want in my life. My poem has a rhyme schyme to it, somewhere...hopefully. I hope you enjoy it, and hope that its good. Also I'm open to any and all questions, comments, and unfortunately criticism. So if you leave any comments I'll try to get back to you as soon as possible.
• Date: 06/13/2009
• Tags: hiseyes overlordiketeru eyes overlord iketeru

His Eyes, by Overlord Iketeru

His eyes always shine

His eyes, are clearer than the blue sky

His eyes, are sweeter than the richest honey

His eyes, are like a crystal clear river that has no end

His eyes, are more soothing than a moonlit ocean

His eyes, are brighter than any light escaping a black hole's grasp

His eyes, soar higher than any bird that can fly

His eyes, are gentler than a newborn baby

His eyes, are worth more to me than a flawless diamond

His eyes, are more elegant than the hand of any queen

His eyes, are more peaceful than any note played by an angel's harp

His eyes are mine.

Comments

[Overlord Iketeru]

Thnks ^_^

[Xxhells bloodxX]

pretty ^_^