If Memory Serves...

• Artist: Reven817
• Description: A song about love, one that never was because the girl in question, whos name i cannot disclose, was my bestfriends girlfriend (T__T)
  So im expressing anger and the strong feelings (Protection, Love) i still feel for her.
• Date: 06/14/2009
• Tags: friends love memories

Verse 1

I walked into your life, and waited so long
Hearing the words you spoke, and the rights you might wrong
Listen to my words, ill say them loud and clear:
My existence is a dead one: for now I truely fear (My world)

Chourus


These memories were once the greatest of great
But then they turned to blackend, darkend hate
I wanted to ask you to be mine, but i didnt have the nerve,
If Memory Serves (Yeah, Yeah, Yeah)

Verse 2

I thought that you were single, can you imagine my glee?
But then i experienced the nightmare, a human should ever see.
I tell you now of my best friend, the guy she calls her man
Can you hear my anger? God knows I can.

Bridge 1

No, No, Nooo..... (Its not true)
NO, NO NOOOO!!!! (This cant be RIGHT)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!(WHYYYYY)

Chourus 2

My assumtion was so negative
My life feels so repetative
i walk into these hollowed halls
Trapped inside the hate-filled walls
Books and pencils are so dead
and my mind has been read
It feels like my hearts been raped:
and there seems to be no ESCAAAAAAAPE!!!!!!

I can still hear my self: "He's All that you deserve"
If Memory Serves....

Bridge 2/Outro

No.......
Noo.......
NOOO.....
NOOOOO!!!!!!!

Comments

[Reven817]

I updated it, so please be truthful about what you think.

ty ^.^

[arisenfey111]

I think its pretty maybe a little more work but I don't write very well so i can't really talk, but keep up the good work hope to see more work from you.

[DarkPrincess1025]

I think the only work it needs is a little reconstruting and a couple words replaced. I'm not trying to be mean,because it really could be great truely, it just needs some more work.