Forever I Will

• Artist: Sexual Isnt It
• Description: Forever I will ......
• Date: 06/15/2009
• Tags: forever will

Forever I will....Love you,
Care for you,
Want you..knowing you dont want me,
Thank you, for hurting me
And showing me what it's like to be heartbroken
Forever I will feel the pain
That you made me feel
Forever....I will.

Comments

[BattleStarPicketFence]

You have a good sense of poetry, and I'm so glad you use real punctuation and capital letters. But to be honest, it's pretty cliche. Show us a poem that reveals you. Not necessarily a poem about you, but that makes your poems stand out from the rest. A poem that makes us say, "Wow! I know whose poem that is!"

[taja_luv16]

omg that was so.....touching