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you said
i'll be there for you
you weren't
you said
i'll catch you
i fell
you said
i'll never hurt you!!
you did
you said
you said so many things
so i had to do something
i did .....
i said.......
- by obamagirl1018 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/15/2009 |
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- Title: You said-
- Artist: obamagirl1018
- Description: hi
- Date: 06/15/2009
- Tags: hurt love
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- D3a7h_G0d - 04/14/2010
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Um....panctuation could use some work as well as capitalizing the letters.
Otherwise as for the;
you said i'll never hurt you!"
You did"
You could have changed that to somethign more emotional.
Anyways, 4/5 ^^
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- Shinrad - 06/23/2009
- pretty good ... most creative writting ive seen so far
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- SOM3BODii TOLD M3 - 06/18/2009
- i like this
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