Il m'aime

• Artist: Panic Pirate
• Description: He's the smile on my face tonight and forever :) Love is pretty much the greatest feeling imaginable. Sorry if you groan "Not another love poem!", but I like to write from my emotions.
  Comments&Criticism
• Date: 06/17/2009
• Tags: love distance

L'amour
Unleash those eyes like the sea on me
Each breath thunderous with rapture
We’re too close; it’s too much; you’re too perfect to believe
All sound drowned by hearts beating faster

Tu me manquer
Spider web eyelashes cling to tears
Our bodies take over despite unspoken fears
Take the plunge into the deep end
Where we stand, hand in hand
Fly away as the voice echoes:
"I’ll only be out for a while
Don’t open the door to anyone
But me"

Je t’adore
As we dream of forever in faraway lands
Hold back the clock’s relentless hands
Hold me; with no intention of a goodbye
And let’s watch the stars take wing into the sky

Comments

[x-Asthenia-x]

I agree with Sunafire, beautiful.
I love the last three lines of the second verse smile and the way you ended it made me smile for a long time. He's going to love it biggrin

[Panic Pirate]

Thanks! smile
It's my (boyfriend? I can't begin describe what he is to me, but I love him) 's birthday tomorrow, so this is for him, I guess heart

[Sunafire]

I love this style of writing, and the poem itself is very beautiful.