Hit Me Like The Wind

• Artist: DJ D O A
• Description: IDK I WAS JUST FREE WRITING COMMENT TELL ME WHAT YU THINK
• Date: 06/23/2009
• Tags: like wind

You walked passed me and yu,
Hit me like the Wind
You look like a twin,
of my fantasy
i want you baby,
Cuz you Hit me like the wind
i don't know what happened
i want you in my life
i wanna make yu my wife
CUZ YOU HIT ME LIKE THE WIND

Comments

[ChibiGinie]

The first line isn't really consistent with the rest of the poem. other than that, nice work. 4/5

[xlBlackWidowlx]

aww. thts sweet =)