Bittersweet Revenge

• Artist: xXx Moody xXx
• Description: This is a tale of the bittersweet revenge of a murdered soul.
  
  *poem...could be lyrics*
  
  **did not create image...I got it from photobucket**
  
  please tell me what you think??? i want honest opinions...plz?
• Date: 06/29/2009
• Tags: bittersweet revenge murder death disapointment

My heart beats faster
With every tear
Beating faster and faster
With all my fear.

A blood curdling scream
Rang through the night
And I died, so it seems,
And ran from the light.

My body fell to the floor,
My "life source" diminished
I shall kill more and more
Until they're all dead and finished.

I will seek my revenge
On those who deserve
And when my death is avenged
I shall move on from this Earth.

Now it is NIGHT,
Time to relish in MY delight!

I know where they live,
I know all their fears.
Revenge I shall give
And I'll laugh at their tears.

I rip out their eyes
Like they did to me,
Even if it's all lies,
They wish they could see.

They gain back their sight
And wish they had not.
They tremble with fright
At the death they had fought.

Their lives then destroyed,
I leave them alone,
But there is still a void,
So with frustration I moan.

No atonement,
I leave only disapointment.

Comments

[Patrubba]

Just fix the typos, I can't stand it when people purposely mispel something. But it's depressing. 3/5

[darkpeppermintroses]

THAT is awesome. They'd be good lyrics--haunting with a great beat. Did you draw the picture?