My Deepest Blue

• Artist: xX Celestial Moon Xx
• Description: This was pretty much stream-of-consciousness, so I'm not expecting it to be very good... Ya, anyway, review if you feel like it ^^
  
  ~KL
• Date: 06/29/2009
• Tags: love pain blue tears dreams

Watching on this moonless night, the tears
Falling from the sky and shattering on the ground
Dampening the fragile wings
Of the butterfly, without a chance to soar

The isolated skies that stole my love
And carried it away to the castle in the night
Painfully picking up the shattered pieces that was my heart
So that I could drop them instead

Even though we never danced, together
We are twirling in my eyes
So I will learn to cry alone again, reflecting in the mirror
The dream that was never brought to life

To carry on into my deepest blue

Comments

[Usaga]

I agree with ------------v
I'm pleased with quite the treat. :3

[TheSunshinecyanide]

Actually do you know whats great about a stream of consciousness? Its brilliant unbridled subjective genius! Good Work. I like the prose style on you. 5/5