Living in your shdow

• Artist: yokume210
• Description: I hven't posted in a long time, so here's some lryics.
• Date: 06/30/2009
• Tags: simple song

As I look into the dark world,
my sight has come blurry
I try to grab your hand,
But you aren't there...

I see your reflection!
Right on top of me!
Your shadow towers over all!

The water start to waver,
and everything is bright!
I try to touch your face!
But I am all alone.

And suddenly it's dark again!
And you whisper in my ear!
Your voice is like the only light in this captivating scene!

I look up and I see it now!
You're towering over me!
Living in this world, alright,
I'm not living in it now!

Instead I'm hiding in the darkness of your shadow!!!!

In the darkness

Comments

[gigglezninja]

shes right exclimations shouldent really be used ...commas are ok though

[-Tessifer]

If you didn't use so many exclamations in your poetry and worked on spelling, you'd be an amazing poet!