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Baby take my hand ,
I'll guide the way through the sand .
the way into your heart is what you showed ,
as we felt as if we were one walking down the road .
kissing in the rain ,
no longer in pain .
we have each other now ,
from this moment on into my heart i allow .
you have it now take good care ,
I don't want it back , no i do not dare .
- by 3SA_TRAVI3SA 13 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/30/2009 |
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- Title: my new love
- Artist: 3SA_TRAVI3SA 13
- Description: 4 the love u found new
- Date: 06/30/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 07/06/2009
- i think its a good start ^^ pay no mind to comments that just critisize
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- ree-ree_bear - 07/04/2009
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Your rhyming techniques are to cliché.
Your theme of the poem needs to be change, reach out be different.
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