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Love is the only way,
to keep away the pain.
Starring into eternal darkness,
And fighting every day.
I can never really stop myself,
Because I hate to think of you.
My mind is the only thing keeping me,
from showing how much I love you.
Please just take me away from here,
Before I do some harm.
For I know not what to do without you.
My one and only scar.
- by BillKaulitzBaby |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/30/2009 |
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- Title: My Feelings
- Artist: BillKaulitzBaby
- Description: This poem was inspired by my feelings i once i had for some one. Now, they are just words i memorized.
- Date: 06/30/2009
- Tags: feelings
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Taste of a Raindrop - 07/01/2009
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Hey! ^_^
This is a nice poem. However, there are a few things. First of all, you don't have to add a comma at the end of each line. Because there's a line break, a pause is automatically there. That's the beauty of poetry razz . Also, starring should be staring. - Report As Spam
- Xxl3roken HeartsxX - 06/30/2009
- wow tht is really good!!
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