My Feelings

• Artist: BillKaulitzBaby
• Description: This poem was inspired by my feelings i once i had for some one. Now, they are just words i memorized.
• Date: 06/30/2009
• Tags: feelings

Love is the only way,
to keep away the pain.

Starring into eternal darkness,
And fighting every day.

I can never really stop myself,
Because I hate to think of you.

My mind is the only thing keeping me,
from showing how much I love you.

Please just take me away from here,
Before I do some harm.

For I know not what to do without you.
My one and only scar.

Comments

[Taste of a Raindrop]

Hey! ^_^
This is a nice poem. However, there are a few things. First of all, you don't have to add a comma at the end of each line. Because there's a line break, a pause is automatically there. That's the beauty of poetry razz . Also, starring should be staring.

[Xxl3roken HeartsxX]

wow tht is really good!!