Rusted Chains

• Artist: Loki-is-a-Dumbass
• Description: This one I wrote after thinking about.
  Well I don't know I had just listened to a bunch of sad love songs
  And this is what came out of my head.
  Check it out, tell me what you think?
  Thanks.
• Date: 07/01/2009
• Tags: rusted chains

Love's chains bound me
I felt worse than dead

Now revenge has found me
And all I see is red

You dropped the ball
and stumbled down

I hope you enjoy the fall
While Satan steals your crown.

It lasted so long
But now it's over

I can finally see
what your love made me

It was just enough
To push me away

Far from life
Too close to death

you steal my very breath
From my sacred body

Are you happy now
Are you satisfied

You've killed me
and burned me

I've fallen below
But i'll rise again

To watch you suffer
In endless misery

Comments

[Sir Von Bloud]

There is no CAPS in poetry!

[Sunafire]

A tad bit of an unoriginal idea, but you still pulled it off, I like the two sentance at a time layout.

[Lyra69]

Very nice.