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You filled my heart with hope,
You gave me a chance when I needed it,
You gave me a reason to smile always,
You gave me life when I was dieing for it,
You have tought me right from wrong,
You have done so much for me and I thank you,
I really miss you and now I have an emptiness inside
me that won't go away what have I done to get it all
ripped away from me?
- by XxMinnie_HeartbreakerxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/03/2009 |
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- Title: What you have done for me.
- Artist: XxMinnie_HeartbreakerxX
- Description: This is a poem that I wrote when I was 10 and it came from my heart. My insperation was my greatgrandfather that past away when I was 5.
- Date: 07/03/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- BIOSHOCK KILLER - 07/10/2009
- i think its kinda nice
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- MademoiselleHarmonie - 07/05/2009
- The basic idea is good. But stop using "You" over and over again...it's repative
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