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He is there always,
He never plays,
He only teases,
And never pleases,
One day he calls me names,
I'm fed up of his stupid games,
To the teacher I did go,
And told the teacher what I know,
In the end he turned from bad to good,
And society look opon him the way they should.
- by The Ghost of Mad Noke |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/04/2009 |
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- Title: The bully
- Artist: The Ghost of Mad Noke
- Description: A poem i wrote for a talent contest but know it means more to me than a peice of work but as an achievement.
- Date: 07/04/2009
- Tags: bully
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Comments (2 Comments)
- z4pper - 07/09/2009
- 0_0 wow I like it!!! I mean who HASN'T had their share of bullying and wishes this would happen right? a star for rhyme 1 star for rhythm and another cuz it's a good ending. and one more cuz it's a socially controversial subject. Minus a star cuz "from bad" kinda throws it off, but overall short, sweet and to the point. AWESOME JOB!
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- Shadowashes - 07/07/2009
- Did you win? I don't really like it, but I don't hate it.
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