I want

• Artist: ClairWest
• Description: I just wrote this about two or three days ago, and I wanted to see what everyone thought. So, be honest.
  I would rather have a blunt truth, then hurtful lie.
• Date: 07/06/2009
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I want to scream. I want to shout.
I want to have faith and never doubt.
I want to bend, I want to break,
to sleep and never wake.
To break down walls and to escape,
be alone and hide my face.
I want to feel, I want to touch.
I want to stop wanting you so much

Comments

[ClairWest]

Thanks for the advice. Much appreceiated!

[Shadowashes]

It needs a bit more description. But a lot of people probably think the same of mine. It's really good though.

[icey_onyx]

its ok, but i think you
could do better poems if
you put your emotions into words ^_^