They say

• Artist: Xx_catch-a-flying-star_xX
• Description: Its when ppl talk that leads to cutting and the punishing of the skin
• Date: 07/06/2009
• Tags: they

She says: look at how ugly she is
He says: shes a freak
She says: dont look at her shes not like us
He says: she'lls never be anything important
She whispers: she cuts
He whispers: i saw them on her arm. Why does she cut?
She whispers: becaz she wants to be normal but we wont let her
He whispers: why
She says: becaz shes cut and anyone who cuts or looks scary is an out cast a nobody a freak shes to diferent not like use never will be like us. She trys to stop but its no use people talk about her cut her down deeper then the marks on her arms no one understand the pain no one understands the sorrow and the hurt she goes throw no one no one no one

Comments

[Knit Purl Knit]

I don't mean to be an old hag about this: but your grammar, punctuation and spelling are all lacking immensely.
This has no depth beyond the dialogue. It seems more like a rant than an actual conversation.