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When I first saw you
I looked into your eyes
And ansaw an angle
Your eyes are like
A forest of lush green trees
And then you blinked
Your eyes no longer
Held angles
When I first saw you
I looked onto your face
And saw it glowed
Your smile is
Beautiful like a rose
And then you turned away
Your face no longer
Glowed
When I first saw you
I looked upon your body
And saw the figure of God
Your figure is
That of Aphrodite's making
And then you walked away
Your body was no longer
The figure of God
But that of man
A beautiful Man...
- Title: When I
- Artist: Hakuriu
- Description: This is for my secret crush. Whom has no idea that I like him.
- Date: 07/07/2009
- Tags: love poetry
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- Shadowashes - 07/07/2009
- Okk, I have no bad feelings towards you people. It's a good poem.
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