Life Taker

• Artist: Rayne Engel
• Description: wow I'm a little embarrassed to say my friend Zetzu (now Dr paradoxx2 cause he was hacked ) inspired this. I don't know why. I was just hanging out with him in towns, and I started typing this. I had named the place "Guns Go Off 2Nite", so that inspired the opening, and he and his outfit expired the rest... It makes me happy i can write poetry. I just wish the inspiration came more often... lol
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: life taker

I heard the gun shots go off that night.
The day has dawned,
The sun so bright.
I try to look at you with all my might,
But I'm shaken with fright.
For what you had done that night.
It all disappeared from my sight,
Your blood stained hands
You killed the man,
I once held dear.
But now all I can see is you
Please, do come near,
You get so close,
Closer than most.
Would ever dare.
Just for a scare
As I lift my eyes to you.
And you take my life,
Into your merciless hands

Comments

[i_Falcon98_i]

very nice poetry!

[gigitgirl]

its ok i think d a m n

[Rayne Engel]

thank you for what? what did i do? =O
I just wrote a stupid poem on an outfit that you loss to a dumb hacker! =D

[PixlePussy]

thank u

[Rayne Engel]

thankyou! =D

[Krasharkk Matsuki]

very nice. i love it

[Rayne Engel]

I don't really think it is.... =O guess that's just meh though.