Family Blues.

• Artist: Luna De Fuego Caelum
• Description: I had a break out with my mother. I wanted to get my stress away so i wrote this. I thought that the gaia community deserved to see it.
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: love hate fighting hardships

I've seen you do this before,
I don't want to see it done anymore,
You say your this great person,
Then you go and reverse it,

I will always love you,
Despite what you do,
But i can't handle the stress,
Or all the rest.

I am forced to yell,
And say "go to hell",
But I don't want to do it forever,
can you stop and be a mother.

you side with your friends,
And i hate how it ends,
With you getting mad,
the me making you sad.

I hate the tears,
I've had enough of them to last a million years,
Can you make them stop coming,
can you make them stop flowing.

I want us be be right,
We used to be tight,
But then it gets hard,
and all that gets lost in the dark,

I want the light to shine,
so we both can be kind,
Can you make that be,
Can you do that for me.

Comments

[Luna De Fuego Caelum]

I wrote it quickly. Sorry if i didn't do that. lol

[-Tessifer]

Very nice, I really like it. You just need to work on your grammer and use question marks where they are needed.

[Taylor_169]

Ditto with Owl, cept I think you should show people things like this

[The Owl Eyes]

Thats amazing. I think we make the best poems when we are hurting. I wrote a good poem when i had a fight with my mum too. It's very nice, you wrote it well. smile