Motherless Child.

• Artist: A t e l i c E n i g m a
• Description: This is bascily about me.. Well enjoy
• Date: 07/15/2009
• Tags: motherless child heartless lies kiler

The eyes of a child can give new light to this world.
The pure love in its eyes can turn to hate in a split second and the demonds it gathers in its head will shadow you until the day you die so you suffer and cry rivers and rivers of redemption.
To take back its loving memories of you becouse it's sick of staying up at night wondering when you'll come home.
But your out getting the s**t you need.
Your selfish needs have gain control of you.
The loving mother that you where is dead just like the playful eyes of the child you so wrongly betrayed and steped away from.
To fight on its own.
To figure out the right way to go, to end up nothing like you to be the total unequal.
But yet a little speack of you lives inside it breathing in its soul.
No matter what it can do nothing will remove it.
Its stuck in like gule something wrongly mistaken for a new birthed you, a corbon reincarnation which the bible never mention but its true.

Comments

[NakedJack]

I understand the need to express, and I dare not comment on the substance, but on the writing. Do you feel truly feel you conveyed yourself? I imagine so much more, and maybe that is why I see this as so stale, but I feel you could have written it so much more passionately. I will give it a 4/5, but only in comparison to what I typically read on gaia.

[Dragons Willow]

oh noes!! it's so sad! T^T well, better to be born with the chance to make something of yourself than to be aborted without a second thought as to what YOU might have wanted. so.....um.....*shouts* FIGHTING!!!! whee