Verge of Breaking

• Artist: Chocol8Chips
• Description: I poem I wrote a while back when I was really depressed.
  I uploaded it once, but for some reason, it disappeared...probably when they were changing the arenas...anyway, here it is again, enjoy and leave a comment =]
  
  PS don't forget to check out my photography entries too! I will upload more later =]
• Date: 07/15/2009
• Tags: verge breaking

Can you tell that I'm crumbling
By looking at me?

I die a little
Everytime I put on that smile you see

I veer further away from the road in front
Everyday I wake

Sure, I smile, laugh
But am I really happy?

Comments

[XxcarlehhxX]

good poem, i wrote a lot too when i was depressed. i posted a couple of mine if ur interested..

4/5

[Colieman5]

you express yourself well and the subject matter has real substance too it. well done.