angel tears

• Artist: Floating Stars
• Description: tell me what you think? be honest but say it nicely please
  example: i'm sorry i don't get it
  instead of: what the . . . it makes no sense
  (yeah some of it doesn't make sense)
  ps. at the end it means rain and this is fictional
• Date: 07/17/2009
• Tags: angels tears

What graceful snow,
pure and white,
never touched,
coming from the heavens at night.

Like angel tears,
through all their might,
they still cry,
those angel of light.

Cry for winter has come again,
birds no longer take flight,
tears shed for the animals that fled,
and their tears freeze at night.

Spring comes,
those angels cry rid of fright,
they cry from joy.

Birds once again take flight,
the animals return more than before,
and angel tears fall once more in the night.

Comments

[Purple_Pearl_Girl]

I loved it. It has a very good ryhme scheem and heart touching.

[Wolfydragon]

I LOVE IT!!!!AND IT MAKES SENSE!!!!

[Floating Stars]

but i totally understand, maybe next time i make a poem it will actually make sense 0.o

[Floating Stars]

well i did say some of it doesn't make sense

[Sinfull_Addiction]

Well first of all.... I live in the state of Maine (which gets really harsh winters) and I know first hand that there are some birds that stay here in the winter and you can see them flying around most of the day. Secondly most of the other animals stay here as well in the winter especially Venison and things such as mountain cats even Bears.

Other then the wrongful information (not sure if it was meant to be fictional or not) I liked it so I would rate it probably a 3 out of 5.