Suicide of Lies

• Artist: BitterSweet Stranger
• Description: Well, This is a poem I wrote on Mon. June 29, 2009 at 5:52pm.
  I know it doesn't rhyme, but not all poems have to rhyme.
  It's short but I think the message gets across pretty clearly.
  So read, and rate if you like. Don't hate, k?
• Date: 07/19/2009
• Tags: suicide lies bittersweetstranger poetry

You cut me deep with your blade of lies.

Tighten the rope of deceit around my neck.

Pass me the pills of deception..

I'll swallow slowly..

Breathing in the toxic air around you..

As I bleed, my last drop..

Still believing every word you said.

Comments

[La Revoir]

I like it. :]
It does pass on the intuition of hate.

[Vipers Flame]

Its good. I like it.

[hurfindurfin]

Its good but it reminds me of someone i hate. 5

[Darkrai8864]

Interesting. I like it.

[l-lorizon]

I like it. (: