War of Mind

• Artist: USA aka Hero
• Description: Just a lyrical poem.
• Date: 07/26/2009
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All my stitches
They just itch, is
It suppose to be like this?

Lips that would kiss
In the abyss
I just don't want
To be like this

Close your eyes
And make a wish
Lose yourself
To find some bliss

This war of mind
Lost to be found
Peace to all
Slaves all around

Just a drop
Fall to the ground
Who told you that
The world was round

Shut your mouth
Don't make a sound
Time for you to
Sink and drown

Lips that would kiss
In the abyss
I just dont want
To be like this

Close your eyes
And make a wish
Sell your soul to
To gain some bliss

This war of mind
Lost to be found
Peace to all
Slaves all around

All I know's
What I've been told
Some old thing
Get's pretty old

Normal is
The way you see
How beautiful
It seems to be

Perfect is
The way you see
How beautiful
You need to be

Comments

[Intrepid Indigo]

I really, really liked this, much better than most of the stuff I have seen so far in the arenas, I don't like the third stanza though, I feel like it was strained in order to rhyme, really cool poem though, it has a nice cadence when read aloud.

[xiEpic_kittyx]

Your poem ish supercallafriggenawsumness ;D lol

[Lost Music Note]

Interesting... I like it =3