a box called life

• Artist: halo_star29
• Description:
  latly i have been feling traped and alone
  i wrote how i feel in this poem
  there is no real structure to it sometimes it ryhms sometimes it doesnt hope you understande
• Date: 07/30/2009
• Tags: called life

im traped no place to go
walls are closing
so alone
i try to fight it
but theres no end
i need some one
to defendend
my mind is failing
emotions running
engines screaming
theres no end in sight

im traped

in a box called life

Comments

[halo_star29]

please no mean comments i feel crappy enough already

[pudditat]

Don't listen to either of them. This isn't very good.

[Sesskogaru]

Nice. This is real good. Especially the ending. ^^ very nicely done. wink keep up the great work.

[mishkasaur]

i like ur poem