Fading Fast

• Artist: Conceited-Little-Uke
• Description: I hope that me writing this will keep my loved one with me. Give me some postive feedback guys. I am really in love with them, but I screwed it up. Help me out with a confidence booster ok?
• Date: 07/31/2009
• Tags: fading fast

I'm falling into the darkness.
No one can save me now,
as I reach out my hand and call for yours.
I need your hand,
in mine.

A simple touch is fine.
Make the darkness
fade away and pull me back into my place.
Im fading fast,
and the good times just dont last.
I'm being taken away,
from that beautiful place.

The days go by,
As you left me there,
i just sit and stare

Hoping, waiting, and watching for you,
a kiss, a brush, a touch will do.
But a life without you?

Im fading fast,
the good times just dont last
as the darkness closes in,
around me.
I reach out,
and hope you find me
before I fade away.

Or is this to be my fate?
A life without you
is like a song without words
I sing this to you and hope that you heard.

A kiss, a brush, a touch will do.
just let me have my last moment
if only a moment I have
before im taken by the darkness

hurry my love im fading fast
the good times just dont last.
my heart is beating ever so slow
just please tell me you wont go.

please dont go.
please dont go.
please dont go.

Im fading fast nothing seems to last.
just hold my hand and stay by my side and ill know everything is alright.

Oh, Please just dont go

Comments

[GirlyGirl65821]

And just to let you all know, it's hard to not be dark and depressed when your heart is broken. I've experienced some pretty bad things too, and it's EXTREMELY hard to stay upbeat and bright. Please be nice here, I can see how something like this could kill you from the inside out.

[GirlyGirl65821]

What an amazing poem. I couldn't write any better myself. ^_^ If you need help, I'm sure I could do something. I hate seeing people become broken hearted, it leaves me wanting to find a way to help. Pm me if you think you need a boost back up. 5/5

[AxeSlayerMiyavi]

If you want your loved one to stay with you, writing a very dark poem is not really gonna do it. Also I just merely browsed it...it's not that good. I used to write stuff like this when I was very depressed and songs made from depression are not that good.

[Conceited-Little-Uke]

people come on! that the best comments you can give me? I dying here, I am falling here. No one to catch my soul and hold it in place. help me!

[Shika Fox]

Nice, I can already think of a cool rift that would fit this great. 5/5

[Psychotic Blasphemy]

Wow, emo! Jk it's nice! 4/5

[Conceited-Little-Uke]

People Please Comment. I Want Some Good Feedback. My Heart Is Breaking. Help A guy Out!