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the burning and the pain
tells me I'm alive
tells me that you're here with me
tells me you've arrived
the heat of the pain
makes life seem so real
makes the hurt of the world
crumble at my heels
the cuts and the bruises
the blisters and the scars
forces me to forget
how very far you are
but no matter where you may be
i hope you think of me
because this bloody hue
makes me think of you
- by Brain shooting Blanks |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/02/2009 |
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- Title: The blood due
- Artist: Brain shooting Blanks
- Description: What is it worth
- Date: 08/02/2009
- Tags: blood pain love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Xxbabby_blueyxX - 08/05/2009
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too much pain!!!!
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but i love itt >:3 - Report As Spam
- TittsMcSammich - 08/03/2009
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First biggrin
This is a beautiful poem. I like your rhyming scheme, and the flow of it. You have a couple of grammar errors, but I'm definately not taking anything off for that because this is beautiful! biggrin 5/5 - Report As Spam