I Miss You

• Artist: redrosefire44
• Description: This is a poem i wrote about my first love who died. Even till today i still love him. This is a little something that reminds me of our times together. Hope you guys like it ^_^
• Date: 08/14/2009
• Tags: miss love saddness

Every time I think of you I cry myself to sleep.
I think about all our memories,
And from that I cannot eat
Every time I close my eyes
It feels like you are standing here.
But every time I open my eyes,
You seem not to be there
When I think of you I am sad
Cause I knew what I did was wrong
What was I thinking to tear us apart
I should have expressed my feelings to you from the start
Every time I think of you I want to call you and say I am sorry
I would do anything in my power just to bring you back
Just to keep you right here with me.
I miss you my love. crying

Comments

[NeoBurley]

sounds like you made the person mad and then they died really that is what i got from the poem "cause i knw what i did was wrong" you need to explain this line more or cut it. sounds great otherwise -neo